In case you had the slightest doubt,
I reiterate that you are again ruling my thoughts.
I think of you whenever I do sleep
and then you caress my cheeks whenever I weep.
When I pass that lonely park lane,
You cloud my mind and cause me pain.
I fight to forget you day and night,
and think of you with all my might.
Now weary and tired I retire to bed,
and you have to drop in my dreams,
as you are even now,Most Wanted.
A poignant work on interpersonal alliance and it’s gravity can well be felt by the readers. An admirable sensitive write Nalini
thanks Maaya.you are always so appreciative
The unsuspecting reader will find this work replete with deep psychological resonances.
that’s what I aimed for Louis.:-) thanks for appreciation.
A poem that engages your critical interest and unsettles your complacency with it’s focus on a ‘magnificent’ obsession.
Yes you looked into it with your keen insight as usual Vijay Ji.thanks
Lovely
thanks a lot Vineetha 🙂
The soulful element of the poem engages the avid reader’s attention to a point where one wants read it again ! Fascinating work.
Thanks for your appreciation Kumaara:-)
An engaging poem on tell tale of brain , thoughts and on relations . A sensitive write and the element of emotions were flowing throughout the nerve and verve of this poem