When silences—long
puncture conversations
in the office, phone or home
it is dead-end lane.
Like the potted plants
withering in the tropical sun
for want of nurturing hands
with tapering fingers
with electric-red nail polish
that once glinted
as a gem
in the corner room.
A brief yet compelling mise-en-scene.
thanks dear Louis. Means a lot.
Excellent ! Crisp and meaningful.
Thanks Vijay for stopping by. Peer evaluation is an important marker.
I’m no one to judge, Sunil Sir…
This is a compelling one 🙂
Thanks dear friend for kind words.
Nice one sir. Silence compared to withering plants…..deep emotion
Thanks for your evaluation.