Whispers in the wind

I longed to hear the whisperings in the wind

Wind that blows as cold as the winter breeze

Breeze that shivers my body in numbness

Numbness within my lonely hearts embrace

Embrace the memories of the long lost soul

Soul that binds my spirit into the pit of darkness

Darkness that dwells in my burdened emptiness

Emptiness that used to be filled with much love

Love that is lost in the sphere of time in forever

Forever that you promised to stay and to hold

Hold my hands tight so I will never fear falling

Falling into the depth of my sorrows and pains

Pains of torment as I drift into the flames of losing

Losing the treasured moments we share together

Together as we breathe the gusty air sending…

Whispers In The Wind.



May be art of tree and nature
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About suzette portes san jose

ABOUT THE AUTHOR SUZETTE PORTES SAN JOSE She was born and raised in Cebu City, spent her elementary years at Stella Maris School, Franciscan Missionary Sisters at Mabolo, Banilad, Cebu City and her high school years at the University of San Carlos Girls High School, Holy Spirit Sisters. She went to college at the University of San Carlos, SVD Priest in Cebu City, Philippines. She is a University half scholar from high school to college. She was born with a passion for writing and living in her art forms. She started writing online in 2013. She now has joined 18 book anthologies from 2015 to 2019. Each of her poems is written with her painting as visuals and is now appearing internationally, namely in the United States, Canada, United Kingdom, India, and the Philippines. She is also a recipient of multiple awards for her ARTworks and Literary works. She was awarded Poet of the Year in 2017 by one of the prestigious poetry site Destiny Poets International Community of Poets UK. Also, a regular contributor to GloMag a monthly issued magazine in India. She has also published her 2 narrative poem Chapbook book "As The Wind Blows" and "Whispering Silence" in the 10 part series. She has also done her first-authored book "The Dawning" along with other books Isle of Words and Colors Vol 1 "Footprints from Every Waks of Life", Isles of Words and Colors Vol. 2 "Journey to the New Horizon" and Kirky’s Adventure Vol.1. Now coming up with Isle of Words and Colors Vol. 3 "At The Rainbows End" and her 2nd book "Whisperings". It has always been her dream to leave her legacy as a fulfilled artist and for her next generation to follow her footsteps. A dream comes true. Thank you, Kirk Dominic (granddaughter) Wilyam Gabriel SJ Reyes (grandson) and Angelito Portes San Jose (only son) for dreams that came to reality.

4 thoughts on “Whispers in the wind

  1. amitapaul

    Excellent use of Anadiplosis (/ænədɪˈploʊsɪs/ AN-ə-di-PLOH-sis; Greek: ἀναδίπλωσις, anadíplōsis, “a doubling, folding up”) , which is the repetition of the last word of a preceding clause. The word is used at the end of a sentence and then used again at the beginning of the next sentence. In Tamil Poetry, this form of poetry is called “ Andhadhi’ , literally translable as “ End- Beginning”.

  2. Brindha Vinodh

    A good andhadhi, a form similar to modern-day loop poetry, though exactly not the same, with introspective reflection.


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