Whirlwind

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In the whirlwind of your thoughts
Past is present, present is future
Like a lost point in infinity…..
Your entity has erased my being

@ DrNikhat Bano
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Image credit: Alan L Boles
2/3/17

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8 thoughts on “Whirlwind”

VijayNair February 16, 2017 at 4:07 am

Succinct ! Excellent selection of words.

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1. Nikhat Bano February 16, 2017 at 2:18 pm
  
  Thanks a lot, Sir! For all the good comments,
  
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Monika Ajay Kaul February 16, 2017 at 7:14 am

Concise and crisp..Yet evocative!!
Lovely 🙂

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1. Nikhat Bano February 16, 2017 at 2:18 pm
  
  Loved your comments!!!
  
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Anita Desai February 16, 2017 at 11:36 am

Simple and expressive. Loved it :).

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1. Nikhat Bano February 16, 2017 at 2:19 pm
  
  Thanks for reading and commenting!
  
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vatsala radhakeesoon February 17, 2017 at 9:21 am

Great philosophical poem ! Excellent !

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1. Nikhat Bano February 17, 2017 at 3:47 pm
  
  Thanks a ton for the lovely comment!
  
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