I left you,you let me go….
I called you,you responded
I got busy,you went silent.
I waited and waited,
No news…
I got back..
You said you waited,
So now lets keep waiting
and keep each other in our mind ,
as you said you do.
Lets keep busy the way you do,
till our last breath depart.
8 thoughts on “Way to remember”
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” Way to remember ” , is suffused with an air of melancholy.
Thanks a lot Louis
Moving and the emotional fingerprint is palpable.
Thanks Gopal ji.i appreciate
A sad but well-composed poem on the complexity of relationships .
Thanks for your motivational words
A slice of a painful relationship and its melancholic emotions…….lovely Nalini
Thanks Maaya ur appreciation means a lot