Way to remember

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I left you,you let me go….
I called you,you responded
I got busy,you went silent.
I waited and waited,
No news…
I got back..
You said you waited,
So now lets keep waiting
and keep each other in our mind ,
as you said you do.
Lets keep busy the way you do,
till our last breath depart.

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8 thoughts on “Way to remember”

Louis Kasatkin April 29, 2013 at 10:09 am

” Way to remember ” , is suffused with an air of melancholy.

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1. Nalini Srivastava October 21, 2015 at 4:14 pm
  
  Thanks a lot Louis
  
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gopallahiri September 20, 2014 at 7:18 pm

Moving and the emotional fingerprint is palpable.

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1. Nalini Srivastava October 21, 2015 at 4:14 pm
  
  Thanks Gopal ji.i appreciate
  
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VijayNair October 20, 2015 at 5:50 pm

A sad but well-composed poem on the complexity of relationships .

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1. Nalini Srivastava October 21, 2015 at 4:15 pm
  
  Thanks for your motivational words
  
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Maaya Dev October 21, 2015 at 8:12 am

A slice of a painful relationship and its melancholic emotions…….lovely Nalini

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1. Nalini Srivastava October 21, 2015 at 4:16 pm
  
  Thanks Maaya ur appreciation means a lot
  
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