Cause for the effect
Or effect of the cause
Infused
In a concoction
Of oblivious glee.
Mirrors batons
Guns and roses
Arrayed In a calculation
Of practiced skill.
Cause of the effect
Or effect for the cause
Lopsided
Muddled
In a conglomeration
Of the bonded and the free.
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Nicely done. “Arrayed in calculation of practised skill”.provides the appropriate commentary for this well constructed poem.
Thank you for your appreciative comments. I apologise for a couple of typing errors… line8…”Arrayed in a..” ‘i’ should not be in capital….and line 9…’practiced’ should have been spelt ‘practised’. Sorry for the unintentional errors.
A commendable effort Louis! Madhumita’s poem is incisive and captivating!
Exquisite and mesmerizing.