Seemingly a crooked cannibal
of clinical calibre ,just out from a
refractory graphite crucible;
Nothing but a highly vacuumized ,
ungenial cylindrical cubicle;
Hollowed out of all good-willed
cherubic innocence and miracles,
Cankerous with the horrendous darkness and
Resonating with sonic howls and screeches;
Defeaning almost the inner cochlea ,
With an impaired area of brocha;
Angst acridly personified ,and
Fully complied to a vigorous
Vestigeal existence !
Almost banging hard even the
Conscience of his clue-less creator,
Still a discrete miniscule vacuole ,
Incomprehensively luminous ,
Ebulliently lashing its way through all the
Odoriferous body humours;
Undoubtedly, it’s a ray of soul-craving,
An effervescent hope of optimism enclosing,
An epiphytic existence in all vivacity,
An inbuilt evangelism, not though in entirety;
Daringly boring his new found rootlets,
Into the petrified yet firing igneous;
Evergreen soul never dies out,
After all the belittling and ignominious;
Fastidiously carrying all the tiny sparks and rhythms,
Ambitiously amphibious!
A little music or a tiny spark
Is too risky a proposition,
For its a lucrative
pheromone at disposition,
for the preying mantids in opposition;
The angst soul yielding into
self-made strangulation;
The draconian hunter, with
all its ulterior nerves and nervule,
Sucks in its prey sumptuously
inside its circling and perplexing whirlpool,
intricately trapping into a flux
of withering deleterious spell;
The tempered soul after all
the onslaughts of treacherous assault,
Bizzarely puts up the step up 3D acts,
Retracting back like the unshaken spirit
of the valiant ,outspoken Julian Assange,
Spurting out of the whirlpool
like a divine dew landing
on a smoothened silken sponge ;
Lavishly shocking its discombobulated
mantid and its clueless creator!
The unseen small vacuole
of spark and rhythm carrier,
assuming gigantic proportions
for the angelical angst survivor !
You can’t deny the obvious technical poetic pyrotechnics.Lots of fireworks and bright colours.Would “in the vein of Modernism” or “Homage to..” be appropriate?I was put in mind of Bartok and Glass (the composer not the substance). As we are wont to enquire in the course of our monthly Poetry workshop proceedings at such a point,was this written in “one go” ?or re-visited after writing?