Body hurt and dismantled
Scraping and limping,
The soul stands with me in all my struggles,
Never complains, never whines,
But, it’s companionship is divine,
For a moment that I stay still, to connect to thee,
(I surrender)
I am jubilant to feel fresh and breath free.
Upbeat , positive and concise. [ Editorial note ] the use of ” & ” in a poem is frowned upon ! always use ” and ” .
Thank you Sir for the guidance.
I Like it so much rashmi . thanks for ur sharing . u have got much bright sensivity than us .
Thank you…
Each individual is beautiful in his or her own way.
Loved it. So nice
Thank you Fatima
That’s very gud
loved it rashmi:-)
Thank you Nalini
The companion divine: Soul! <3
yup haanji
Promising.
Thank you Gopal