October Rain 4 Replies Wet yet warm Rain sounds Mood high Sky not blue Café lonely Without you You came For a cup or two I left For an errand to do Now at the table once more It’s raining just like before Wet yet warm On earth’s thirsty floor. Share this great work...FacebookTwitterLinkedinTumblrReddit
Louis Kasatkin July 25, 2018 at 10:31 am A succinct ,stylish poetic foray that traverses greater existential depths. Log in to Reply ↓
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A succinct ,stylish poetic foray that traverses greater existential depths.
Epigramatic ,simple , uncomplicated style conveys a lot more than meets the eye.
Succinct and thought-provoking.
Thank you very much for these comments!