Mutated nerves of iron,
sympathetically malleable,
Razoring merciless like a
daggering dragon;
Exaggeratingly dilating the
docile black disciples, pupils,
yielding almost the
mission impossible!
Rambling rush of the
maddening manna,
Now not for fight or flight,
Baffling though, buffering happening,
Incising pain yet addictively edible;
Tetrads Iris so quadrilateral,
Coincidentally Intersecting
beyond all barricades!
Sorcar –Houdini Acts
now explicable,
Audacious magnetic torus
Making the circumference,
Ground zeroed and given to
The untenable t triumphant tactics,
Blinded by the feather-winged globules
of rainbow coloured running around,
With an unapprehended aura
of infinite suns and staring starlets;
A perfect apocalyptic rehearsal,
Or is it the exact reversal?
Brazenly lifted off the heels,
Defy gravity acts never before..
Domino’s effect well in effect
just by the youthful defect
of the black docile pupils!
Semantics of romances,
Still hanging in the air ,
where my traces was there earlier,
Tragic hunt of your magic dents,
I am now here…oh
spoonerisms galore,
I am no where!
Even google’s swollen eye , tired after all tries,
Displayed about me,” No Results Found”.
The poem has a sublime,immersive quality.To be read and swept along with the force of it rather than to be understood in the everyday sense of “understanding”.There definitely is a tendency in your writing,submitted thus far,that shouts “performance!”.If this poem was an entirely differnent art form,it would be Ballet!
Heartfelt thanks Louis again ) I thot of experimenting newer styles of expression,a bit contemporary or even futuristic ……and the result was what i got … & Thanks foer the BALLET comparision !! Ever indebted to you for your genuine feedbacks-positive & more importantly negative ones too,as tose negatives are the critical ones to improve upon !!!
You have a way with words, Umarani. Interesting!
Thnx Madhu Ji ) am humbled ..