I suppose you know
How the evening will eventually go
There will be good food
To set the mood
You will be, at once
Both easy and tense
Feign nonchalance
At first glance
The banter will grow
Just so that she is sure
After dinner it could go
Right up to her door
There will be talk
Of cinema and books
Half way through
Both on tenterhooks
By the time the dessert is served
Still space left
For such a meal, you were
For eons bereft
You drop her
Right outside her place
‘Will she won’t she?’
Who will initiate
Take that risk on a first date
Parting of the lips so slight
You know the moment feels right
Could there be a hint
More blatant
Finally you here
The magical words
‘Come in for coffee’
That hot beverage
Much maligned
The last thing
On your minds
A nifty little piece that rehashes all too familiar tropes from the likes of Bob Dylan’s ,”If you gotta go,go now”.
Thanks a lot Louis …. This is just my fun tribute to that fun cliché we have seen in so many films.
An interesting poem bringing out the tensions of a first date for a mature couple .
Thanks a lot Amita – You are absolutely right regarding the age group one visualizes.
Wonderfully Visual Poem with Subtle Humor and delightfully crafted.
Thanks a lot Amit
An engaging,witty ,and satirical piece.
Thanks a lot, Vijay