I wrote your name
On the shore
With golden letters
And when the waters
Washed it away,
I cried.
However, when I dived deep,
I realised with my eyes wide open
That they had turned into pearls.
Pramila Khadun
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Love is a lasting emotion and always find its reason to be happy. Beautiful
Thanks dear Maaya for this great comment which i love lots.
How superbly the sublimity of love is conveyed in this short masterpiece.
Vijay dear, i always feel thrilled to read your comments, they are simply superb.
This evokes a timeless ,nostalgic quality very reminiscent ,for this reader ,of the early works of Carole King and Joni Mitchell.
Thanks a lot my dear friend Louis for this scintillating comment, love it with all my heart.
Beautifully expressed!
Thanks gopallahiri for your wonderful appreciation, love it.
‘Love’ly! An expressive, lasting poem
Thanks dear Vineetha for this lovely comment, love it.
I have been to that same bea
Sorry Pramila……..writing too fast “I have been to that same beach, but I found only sand”
Next time we must go together John, we will surely find something………haha!