There was no earth
no moon, no sun, no star
the canvas was quite blank.
Your solidarity was impassionate
preponderence of your lyrical voice
burst into tears, flooded the canvas
manifestation of your soulful
emotion
came across the live poetry
festivity of new creation made you
to smile
and pervaded the entire canvas.
Oh, the Great Poet!
did you start the creation
with your poetic version
impugned with tears and smiles.
Your hollowness created
several stars and planets
some glowing, some scarlet
your Maya diffused over the canvas
like the bubble; thus your poetry
started tinkling with seven sounds
entwined with love, peace, joys,
sorrows
glamour, pain and salvation.
Music sprouted from your poetry
spouted throughout the canvas
jingled with your enormous flavor
you invigorated each fusion of your
music
the entire creation started warbling
in your praise to explore your
presence
Destiny Poets
Uniting and celebrating the best "Writers" and "Poetry" from around the world centred out of Destiny Church Wakefield
” Eternal creation ” goes beyond merely being an engaging work .It bears the hallmarks of a vociferous paean which would have benefitted with a tad more editing from its author. It might have ironed out a tricky line such as , ” preponderance of your lyrical voice burst into tears “. “preponderance of,” does from the casual reader’s point of view blunt somewhat the exquisitely crafted notion, ” your lyrical voice burst into tears “.
Thank you so much sir for your worthy suggestion.
Regards.