The raging ocean
Thrashes my invisible boat
Turning it upside down
Invisible me
Drowning in the sea
Waves of sand
Crabs eating up the land
The stuff that dreams are made of
Stuffed in the small lifeboat
Sinks the dreams forever
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Visual and philosophical on the boat but in the sea its deep and meaningful.
Sameer thank you
A disquieting poetic divertissement. Deceptively rendered in the style of a children’s nursery rhyme with added Freudian psychodrama.
Thank you for tour comment Louis
Short yet full of visionary glance. Philosophic and the beauty of symbolism is greate. Beautiful imagery.
Thank you Jagdish Singh Ramana
Sameer thank you
An engaging,lyrical,magical poem;it’s charm is enhanced by it’s simple imagery.
Vijay Nair sir thank you ☺️
Very apt use of imagery in ‘Dreamboat’
Pushmaotee Subrun thank you
lovely and strong imagery enhances the beauty of the poem,
Thank you Abu Siddik