Dream in blue.

As a young boy I had a dream…a dream ever so blue.
The perfect scenario…from where it came I don’t have a clue.
This naive and pure dream…I wanted it for all the world to know.
In shinning spotlight I stood alone…wanted all to see what I had to show.

Dream in blue…forever caught up in me and not in you.
Dream in blue…for all the world it became only for a few.

Dressed in youth’s clear view…caught in the same game as you.
I saw the differance in what color we shake…what hand we take.
Never really understood…color, shape or gender but still they brake.
As a young boy I saw no differance…and it’s still hard to take.

Nothing is ever really true…like my dream in blue.
Nothing is ever really true…truth is only for the few.

Sometimes crying is all what’s left…vanished in like a grand theft ever so old.
I was a fan of our world…now I know only few don’t hear what’s been told.
We can never repay mistakes of the past…only atone for the mistakes of the time.
My blue dream became an infallible impossibility…considered a legalized illegality of crime.

Dream in blue…forever caught up in me and not in you.
Dream in blue…for all the world it became only for a few.

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About jachso

Hey Destiny Poets. I live in Denmark about 90 km from Copenhagen and works in Roskilde as a teacher and mentor. I'm probably not like most men of my age and yes I am aged 50 years old. I've tried a lot of jobs without finding what I'm passionate about. Writing, I have always loved and I was probably just 14 years old when I produced my first poem. I have not yet been released some of my poems, but I hope it happens one day. I just finished a novel which I would like to have published, now the time and talent show whether I have the ability to write. Poetry has a special meaning for me and this is where I really feel at home. My life has sometimes been marked by many losses. In the mid eighties, I lost my fiance at the time when the accident happened was pregnant. She lost control of the car and drove herself and her child, who was on his way thereby, to death. It has really made its mark on my life and way of thinking. In the late nineties, I had problems with my back and had to seek other avenues to support myself. I finally decided to enroll at university and was admitted to the humanist line. I read philosophy, science, psychology, journalism and history, but philosophy and psychology is my major interest. I thrive today in the RUC aka Roskilde University just 25 km from Copenhagen. My job is to guide and teach, and it is a job with speed and that gives me a lot again. I have two collections of poems ready to be released, if I can find a publisher who will publish them. I have no children, it would obviously be my lot in life although I have tried, but luck never smiled at me that way. If you have any questions for me so I hope you just ask away all you want, I'll respond as soon as I have read the questions. With kindest regards from Jan Sorensen

4 thoughts on “Dream in blue.

  1. amitapaul

    Determined use of rhyme , repetition , and strong effort to make the poem into a song . The old- fashioned word for such efforts was lyricism .

  2. Nalini SRIVASTAVA

    Beautifully lyrical verse imbued in blue and that too with in a dream.I wonder what makes so many of us dream in blue .It is is favourite color of my dreams too.feels like a story recited on a lyre


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