Breath 11 Replies Happiness slips through the grip, like the thinnest sand, on the beach of life, leaving only barbed memories behind, in a never-ending spiral. Yet, we hang on, like charged particles in the air. Share this great work...FacebookTwitterLinkedinTumblrReddit
amitapaul August 12, 2021 at 4:33 pm Short, vivid and effective. The abrupt end leaves the reader hanging like the charged particles hanging in the air that it refers to. Log in to Reply ↓
Dr Swati A Gadgil August 13, 2021 at 4:58 pm Very nice …few words and more emotional content…. Log in to Reply ↓
VijayNair August 13, 2021 at 5:34 pm Exquisite in style and content.Admirable economy of expression. Log in to Reply ↓
tapeshwar August 13, 2021 at 7:28 pm Dynamics of a charged overview gives ulterior meaning to the whole. Exquisite! Log in to Reply ↓
Chaitali August 13, 2021 at 10:59 pm I was experimenting trying to express myself with few words! Log in to Reply ↓
Brindha Vinodh August 13, 2021 at 9:49 pm Reality so succinctly put with economical use of words. Log in to Reply ↓
Short, vivid and effective. The abrupt end leaves the reader hanging like the charged particles hanging in the air that it refers to.
Hi Mam, Thank you for your beautiful remark.
Succinct and so realistic.
Thank you so much for reading it!
Very nice …few words and more emotional content….
Thanks a lot for your feedback!
Exquisite in style and content.Admirable economy of expression.
Dynamics of a charged overview gives ulterior meaning to the whole. Exquisite!
I was experimenting trying to express myself with few words!
Reality so succinctly put with economical use of words.
Thanks a lot Brindha, for reading it!