An ocean apart we appeared to be,
Country ,religion and culture defined my boundary
When luck struck as a lightening
Beckoning us towards a joint destiny
Encompassed by a feeling never felt before
Slowly silently the hearts resonated
Transcending the man made boundaries
Being woven into one by the talismanic ring
With the passing of time our worlds changed
Passions faded and feelings dulled.
In distress and distrust our lives were plunged.
Alas! The talisman ceased to cast its spell
Like strangers at home, we started to dwell
Once rhapsodically involved and epitome of love
Now lying so close yet oceans apart we became.
A delightfully engaging poetic divertissement.
WELCOME TO DESTINY POETS!
Thank you Sir Louis Kasatkin for accepting me as the member of this esteemed poetry group.
Hope to contribute many of my poems here.
A well-composed,poignant narrative.
THANK YOU sIR FOR READING MY POEM AND LEAVING AA COMMENT.
The overpowering influence of time, well portrayed in the poem.
Thank you for catching the point.
Thank you for catching the point.
So close and yet an ocean apart… a very touching reality in so many ’empty shell’ marriages…
Thank you for appreciating it.
Delightful narrative