A Poem with Fusion of Words

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Te amo

Na-bi

La flor

Arc-en-cial

El rio

U-san

So-pung

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Te amo my darling sweety,

You make my heart flutter like a Nabi.

Seeking for honey in the garden of La flor,

I am still waiting for love galore,

To crown me with happiness,

Like the Arc-en-cial’s  brightness.

Yes my beloved, let it flow

Like the Ganges el rio.

Like an u-san it will shelter me,

Like spring’s beauty,

In life, making me feel a permanent so-pung.

My darling, am sure your love newly sprung

Will lead us in a paradise so heavenly

You will rejoice whole heartedly,

For I shall bestow my love on you lavishly,

Yes, abundantly.

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©Pushmaotee Subrun

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About Pushmaotee Subrun

Pushmaotee Fowdur Subrun was born in 1949 in Mauritius. She pursued higher studies in Delhi University where she graduated in English. For the past forty-four years she has worked in secondary schools, seven years of which she spent in Masvingo, Zimbabwe, teaching English in an army school. She completed her PGCE at the Mauritius Institute of Education in 1993. After her retirement, she was a member of the Council of the University of Mauritius for three years. She is currently a reader and editor in the Ministry of Arts and Culture. She has written one novel, one play and Short Stories and Fables. Her poems have featured in Setu Magazine, ‘Poetry and Creativity’ and in Atunis Poetry.

3 thoughts on “A Poem with Fusion of Words

  1. amitapaul

    Using Spanish and Korean words for
    I love you
    Butterfly
    The Flower
    Rainbow
    The Stream
    Umbrella
    and
    Picnic ,
    the poet has experimented with writing English Poetry with Fusion Words from other languages .
    The mood of the poem and the reference to the arc en ceil put one in mind of the lovely song in in Spanish titled “ Ceilito Lindo” .

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  2. Pushmaotee Subrun Post author

    Te amo I love you(s)
    Na-bi – Butterfly(k)
    La flor – the flower(s)
    Arc-en-cial – rain bow(f)
    El rio- river(s)
    U-san – umbrella(k)
    So-pung – picnic(k)
    Thanks for the ind comment poet Amita

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