Your loving presence

It happened just day before yesterday,

That we noticed a twinkle in your eyes,

May be you had wound up with yet another mischief,

Pretending as not being a part of the conspiracy,

You raced out,

And we saw our whole universe toppled with loving presence.

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Writing is my passion. It is the best way to convey my feelings, emotions & views. I consider myself blessed to be able to use this medium & reach to the world. Any moment can be captured through poetry. Poetry is healing & is my life. I love to read what others write & listen to people while they narrate their stories. My blog is a medium of self- expression www.researcheye.wordpress.com.

5 thoughts on “Your loving presence

  1. Louis Kasatkin

    The poem is a poignant snapshot of everyday family life. The only note of editorial concern is the use of ” yesterday “,while it may seem to be important to the narrative, it renders the opening line ungrammatical. ” It happened just day before yesterday ” ,can either be rendered – it happened just yesterday- or – it happened the day before.

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