It happened just day before yesterday,
That we noticed a twinkle in your eyes,
May be you had wound up with yet another mischief,
Pretending as not being a part of the conspiracy,
You raced out,
And we saw our whole universe toppled with loving presence.
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The poem is a poignant snapshot of everyday family life. The only note of editorial concern is the use of ” yesterday “,while it may seem to be important to the narrative, it renders the opening line ungrammatical. ” It happened just day before yesterday ” ,can either be rendered – it happened just yesterday- or – it happened the day before.
Your editorial notes always guide me thank you
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It always makes a full circle even when we are trapped between square, rhombus or trapezium!
Full marks!
Hey Tapeshwar thanks you!!