YOU ALWAYS SAY THAT
You always say that
I am amazing with words
though I often feel
words are not enough
when it comes to express
my passion, raw and intense
the pain of knowing that
you are not mine
so – so far away
from my mortal reach
I can’t see you
I can’t hug you
I can’t hold you in my arms
I can’t whisper in your ears
that all will be fine soonest
how can words express
how much I long to hold your hands
how I crave for your cozy smile
and that light in your eyes
all I have to offer are these words
all wrapped in love
of thousand of lifetimes
I fail to express all and enough
I brush away failure every time
when you say
I am amazing with words.
The poet definitely has a way with words , especially the expression of intense emotion .
Thank you Amita, we are all wordsmiths indeed.
A well-crafted,poignant,and emotionally-charged poem.
Thank you Vijay for your honest and sincere views as always.
You are indeed amazing with words, an emotional and beautiful poem.
It is indeed heartening to read your views on my poem. Thank you.