Why did you turn on me?

We were free and so in love with one another,
now it seems as it really bother.
Why can you not see?
The love radiate from inside of me.

Why did you turn on me?
Can’t belive the true love you see.
The time we have is so limited,
and none of us were intimided.

Truth is, that love I never share,
and truth is, that it is for you I care.
Don’t kill the love I have for you inside,
it’s the feeling that I never hide.

Why did you turn on me?
Leaving me here and nothing to see.
How much do I have to prove to you?
My love for you keep my heart ever so true.

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About jachso

Hey Destiny Poets. I live in Denmark about 90 km from Copenhagen and works in Roskilde as a teacher and mentor. I'm probably not like most men of my age and yes I am aged 50 years old. I've tried a lot of jobs without finding what I'm passionate about. Writing, I have always loved and I was probably just 14 years old when I produced my first poem. I have not yet been released some of my poems, but I hope it happens one day. I just finished a novel which I would like to have published, now the time and talent show whether I have the ability to write. Poetry has a special meaning for me and this is where I really feel at home. My life has sometimes been marked by many losses. In the mid eighties, I lost my fiance at the time when the accident happened was pregnant. She lost control of the car and drove herself and her child, who was on his way thereby, to death. It has really made its mark on my life and way of thinking. In the late nineties, I had problems with my back and had to seek other avenues to support myself. I finally decided to enroll at university and was admitted to the humanist line. I read philosophy, science, psychology, journalism and history, but philosophy and psychology is my major interest. I thrive today in the RUC aka Roskilde University just 25 km from Copenhagen. My job is to guide and teach, and it is a job with speed and that gives me a lot again. I have two collections of poems ready to be released, if I can find a publisher who will publish them. I have no children, it would obviously be my lot in life although I have tried, but luck never smiled at me that way. If you have any questions for me so I hope you just ask away all you want, I'll respond as soon as I have read the questions. With kindest regards from Jan Sorensen

4 thoughts on “Why did you turn on me?

  1. Louis Kasatkin

    The general; reader will find this to be a heartfelt contemplative work.

    Editorial note for the benefit of the author:-
    I was pleasantly surprised by the use of the neologism ” intimided” in the 2nd verse in order to facilitate a rhyme.


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