You might not have thought
That countless will mourn you ,
And will shed copious tears and cry.
Why you didn’t think of us ,
When you decided to quit and die?
If only people who feel deserted
Look around for people who love.
They might not feel so left alone.
If only they raise a cry
For sure someone who cares will turn up there soon.
If only the ones in pain
Decide to share the pain and cry,
I am sure they will feel the release
Which is better than to quit and prefer to die.
You left the world in pain to get rid of your pain,
If only you would have reached across,
It would have been everyone’s true gain.
The ones who feel that death is the only solution
Just think of your loved ones who might not always express the support or say.
But every life is precious for some one close
Just look around,It will make your day.
*P.S In memory of someone very precious but who left too soon.
Destiny Poets
Uniting and celebrating the best "Writers" and "Poetry" from around the world centred out of Destiny Church Wakefield
Beautifully written..
SSR your pain didn’t end here, its passed on to your family, friends, and well wishers… still in shocked..
May you get rest in peace..
Thanks Richa for your words of appreciation
True . Suicide is no solution to problems but it is up to those around to identify the symptoms and help
Thanks Swati.You pointed out correctly.
Gosh this is straight from a heart full of pain, beautifully said. Blessings of comfort and peace
Yes it is.Though a celebrity killed himself but it has shaken us all.
Poignant and moving.Sushant Singh Rajput’s death,to many of us,was a personal loss.
Yes Vijay Sir.I and so many more are still restless and can’t get over his suicide.thanks for appreciation
The poem gives a subtle expression to the value we give to the people who depart all of a sudden leaving an unpredicted void. Delicate yet realistic.
A loss though not truly personal yet very close to heart.So many of us affected.thanks for your words of appreciation