Dumb roots
Down the crust
Dungeon Dark
Never touches
Light above
But still
Branches uphold
The victory
In leafy flag
Swaying to music
Floating around
Undefeated in
Natures call
Destiny Poets
Uniting and celebrating the best "Writers" and "Poetry" from around the world centred out of Destiny Church Wakefield
At 29 words, ” Victory ” is a pared-down circumspect poem that conveys the air of mystery and of a bigger story yet to unfold.
I agree with Louis. Fluent and endearing.
My words falls short for thy comprehension of the embedded mystery and ethereal sprouting of wings!
So much thankful to thee Louis!
Thanks Gopallahiri Ji for orbing it with the sweet music!