Life drowns the living
hope chokes all of our dreams ,
mercy punishes justice
what we see is not all what it seems ;
Emptiness fills all the spaces
winter snow lights our fires ,
shortages make for abundance
all oaths are spoken by liars ;
Those who don’t cheat are disqualified
we donate our poverty to others
sad people are the happiest in the world
all men under the skin aren’t brothers.
Lines such as – …” all oaths are spoken by liars “… are so powerful as to render this poem
a masterpiece .
Fluent and Powerful.
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The comment (by kelly bella):
This is NOT the time for the favorite button to stop working. I like this one… well, I like all of your work…. it’s just that this one seems to pour out of my mindset though IO wish I were more of an optimist. You must have a book of poetry published out there somewhere—I and millions of others want a copy. Truth.