Unrealistic Glimpse…

For a while,

wake me not,

from deep slumber,

let me live,

in the space of,

sweetest dream.

I am surrendering,

my reality for a lie,

I am in love with.

I know it is transitory

certainly fragile!

Perhaps a mere illusion

of a desiring mind.

Or may be an unived

cherishing wish!

It is winsome

purely whimsical

unreal though..

Yet, I love the way

it woos my senses and

captures my heart.

For a while

wake me not

from deep slumber.

Once again let me live

with all unrealistic glimpses

I am in love with..

© Maaya Dev

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About Maaya Dev

Maaya Dev is an Indian based poetess and an economics graduate. Her poems have found place in several national and international anthologies and journals like Episteme, Criterion, Langlit, Anthesis, Eternal, Wings, Forever, Change, The Significant Anthology, Aquillerelle Wall of Poetry Book 5, Umbilical Cords, Kaafiana. She is a winner of Delhi Poetry Challenge – Kaafiya Contest 2015 and a short story winner Seasosn 1 at StoryMirror. She is a contributor at many reputed poetry sites and won few poetry contests. She is also conferred with the title of ICOP Critic of the year 2015 at Destiny Poets UK( An International Community of Poets). Her debut anthology ‘SHIMMERING CHIMES’ got published by AUTHORSPRESS Delhi, in Sept 2015.She blogs at maayas-musing.blogspot.in.

2 thoughts on “Unrealistic Glimpse…

  1. Louis Kasatkin

    ” Unrealistic Glimpse ” , is a skilfully crafted ,contemplative work that uses the well worn dream/illusion trope well.
    However,on a minor EDITORIAL NOTE, the final 3 lines require attention.At present , ” and makes me long ,to live with those,” does not make sense, What precisely is being referred to by your use of the word “those” ? And the use of quotation marks around the final phrase left the reader baffled.Why use quotation marks and what is meant by the term unrealistic glimpse ?

    Together with the accompanying , ” Oh My Poem ” ,it heralds the arrival of Destiny Poets’ International Community of Poets’ newest registered member..Welcome Maaya Nair !

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  2. maaya Post author

    Thank you Louis for your review about my poem…I noticed the error I made while conceiving the above 3 lines of my poem….About the title, Unrealistic Glimpse…I felt dream is not real and it is just a glimpse, we get when we are asleep…hence I opt to use the above title for my poem…Thanks & regards once again….

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