Why pick those threads of virtue
which needle your every thought?
When such dogmas stitch and sew
to tailor you with a knot.
Let the tongue utter your mind,
and unbutton the desires.
Tho the words seem undefined-
they roll to kindle fire.
The coat of colourful wits-
deep within the soul bird knits.
Beautifully woven poem with the wisdom of the poet and thought… great work indeed.
Thanks so much,Sameer.
each virtue made us whole but we are so imperfect some didn’t exist in our hearts as visions of our desire dictates our mind so does wisdom to choose and utter what is right and wrong that becomes a choice… a thought-provoking dear 🙂
Wow! that is beautifully dissected.Thanks so much, Suzette.. Appreciate.
An excellent, introspective and analytical poem with images from the same register deftly interlinked.
Thank you so much, Vijay sir.
A delightfully pithy oeuvre from the pre-eminent exponent of incisive,poetic brevity.
Thank you so much, Louis. Appreciate.
Lovely poem calling for the need to break all bonds and live life with much spontaneity.
Beautiful imagery!
Thank you so much, Vatsala.
You are welcome 🙂
Wonderful poem
To untie all knots is such a great idea