My friendship, nullified
Your words
Your sight
Your ears;
In becoming you
Your call
Was the deepest ocean
That mirrored
My skies
My void
My cry
My friendship, breath
Unfathomable whole
Painless pain
Soundless sound;
With choir of birth and death
Your call
Was heard more
When I parcelled
My silence
Under the earth
An analytical piece on the enigmatic nature of friendship, written in sublime language.
Thy commenth, thy precious gem! So much thanks dear Sir Vijay Nair Ji!
A poignant reflection on identity , loss and deeper existential tropes.
So much thanks dear Sir Louis Kasatkin! Thy commentg, my valuable asset!
Except for the last stanza I see little in the whole poem ! But you know what !! Silence is golden !!!
Dear my poet friend… speechless …! Golden words!! So much thanks … 🙂