A part of me is dead..you said,
A part of me is dead too
you see I want to tell you.
Can’t two dead people come together,
And become alive once more.
Love is an illusion you feel,
Love is a pain I say,
Can’t we bring to life,two souls in pain,
to create a smiling life .
You negate hopes,
I promote togetherness.
I envisage a day when two aliens
To each other,shall be whole again.
A part of you always lives,
In this cosmos,they say.
May be for a purpose.
Universe with its black holes,
Probably pulsates with these parts
And life breathes on somewhere,far away.
Two negatives join in to become a positive,
Lets try to spread some radiance, once again.,
Till we get eclipse again.
An excursion into the far realms of the existential rendered with the author’s customary poetic aplomb.
Being distant and yet the desire to unite again as souls…I feel the poem has the message of why not start the radiance here and now… as breathing souls!
An interesting poem that brings together paradoxes and metaphysical longing.
Poem celebrates positivity.