He drank wine
It stirred in his blood
Then his spirit woke
I gazed through my veil
His eyes of azure
Marvels on me
Smiling mysterious
In the abyss of spirit
I glanced at him
lifting my veil
Lowered his face
his cold eyes
Chilled my soul
Still untouched
they never speak
A word for me
He walked away
Leaving me
Into oblivion
the flute played
music of ruin
Tune of
Legacy unveiled
Spirit dropping
Saddest dreams
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Oh wow. Wat a beautiful n touching poem. Could really feel the pain of the poet’s abandonment.
Thank you Jonyboy.
Touching poem, Rekha
Thank you so much Vineetha.
A very thought provoking.
Thank you so much Ramesh ji.
Catches momentarily those incidents of anguish which we all feel from time to time.
Absolutely right Louis sir. Some things, though very small or un-noticeable to others, can leave one, with a lot of pain inside. Appreciate your comments, immensely. Thank you.
An admirable write and deeply touching…Rekha 🙂
Thank you Maaya. Happy that you liked it.
You not only feel the words you visualise them. Well written poem.
Your words are so encouraging Rashmi. Thank you so much.
Moving poem. Liked a lot
Thank you Gopallahiri.
Destiny Poets’ International Community of Poets ( ICOP ) are pleased to announce that for April 2015 , the following works have been chosen in the categories of Poem of the Month and Highly Commended . Poem of the Month ..** Ashtavakra – Vineetha Mekkoth **…..In the Category of Highly Commended ( Tabulated alphabetically ) are the following…..** An Bothar (The Road) – John Anthony Fingleton **…..** Dissolve in me – Rashmi Malapur **…..** Fifty Feathers for my Flight – Iulia Gherghei **…..** Fight of Shadows – Neetu Wali **…..** Fireflies of Time – Maaya Dev **…..** Flowers in a pot – Sunil Sharma **…..** Impaled – Elizabeth Hexberg **…..**Memories – Santosh Bakaya **…..** (The) Minion – Nalini Srivastava **…..**Mortgage Your Blood – Tapeshwar Prasad **…..** On Life’s Meaningful Pauses – Witty Fay **…..** Tunes of Ruin – Rehka Moothedoth **…… ICOP CRITIC Award for April goes to..Pramila Khadun & Maaya Dev.