Their War

Ear-shattering lullabies
And muted cries,
Smoke-veiled skies
And unsaid goodbyes –
Were yours and mine
Since we opened our eyes.

In ruins we played,
Where once people prayed
And love was portrayed,
When peace had stayed –
These are yours and mine,
The memories so frayed.

Food bags with bombs,
The roads our own tombs,
Dear lives in wombs,
Seeking refuge in roofless rooms –
This page is yours and mine,
Which drowns, drains and dooms.

I remember how you’d cried
When the bad boy had pried
Away your doll’s limb; I tried –
I gave you my doll’s; your tears dried-
This loss is yours and mine,
Your legs, my arms; hopes’ve died.

Peace smiled from afar,
Like a delusional star,
Everything that was, is now char,
Blood looks like dried tar –
That stain is yours and mine,
Our forgotten life, their celebrated war.

6 thoughts on “Their War

  1. Louis Kasatkin

    ” Their War ” , by its very subject matter is a sombre poem. The Poet’s skill , and the hallmark of a really good poet, is to re-work and reinvigorate an otherwise too familiar theme. Sana achieves poetic renewal of the subkject matter with insight and compassion into the distressing and inhuman consequences of war.

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  2. Fathima Manal

    I dont know whether i am eligible to comment on your poems because i am a newcomer in this field but yes, i really love your poems.

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    1. Sana Rose

      Thanks Fathima.. Of course you are eligible to comment on any poem as long as you understand it. 🙂 and am sure you get this one. Courage is what poetry takes – to read and to write.

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  3. Kamlesh Acharya

    Poignant, introspective and viewing the tragedy of war from a solemn but fresh perspective. Thank you for enriching my vision Sana. 🙂

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