Syringes have
A wonderful way to get you
Through your veins
Working its way on human body:
Injecting in
Or pushing out;
Firstly
It attaches with a steel strong long needle
And
By smooth force of doctors thumb
Writes the whole story of victory
Over the obdurate cells
An excellent, well-crafted, minimalist poem.
So much thanks dear Sir Vijay Nair Ji.
A concise work delivered with surgical precision and the author’s customary,inimitable poetic aplomb.
So much thanks for thy precious comments dear Sir Louis Kasatkin.
A novel way of entering human blood through a poem. Brilliant.