Pray for desires
wish for happiness
yearn for success
won’t settle for less
I can’t be a mess
trace of luck
dash of misfortune
splash of colours
on my canvas
shades of grey
blue and bay
my ship sails
sea, rough or calm
no qualms
about the course drawn
my resolution on board
am not a pawn
on destiny’s checkerboard
quail am I
or phoenix be it
pray for desires
wish for happiness
that be it !
( ©Dr. Swati A Gadgil, All Rights Reserved.)
Witty and catchy! An enjoyable reading experience.
The reader will find this pithy,which includes all of the following:- brief, cogent, compact, concise, epigrammatic, expressive, finely honed, forceful, laconic, meaningful, pointed, short, succinct, terse, to the point, trenchant.
Awesome write ! I like the break of lines in this way .
you have it all…a countless star of all that made the difference… yet points out only to oneself … quite a bit hard to digest… thought provoking…
Loved this one, it has a rhythm
Poem filled with Rhythm, Rhythme and tempo taking us to a amazing journey.