So fallen apart.
It is like I have always told…
if you give up we are both sold…
and nothing more to hold.
My thoughts keep me awake at night…
like memories kept out of sight…
and searching for that light.
You keep me on my knee…
until the day I can see…
the two of us was never mend to be.
Singing this sad song for both of us is turning my heart to ice…
some said that lightning never strikes in the same place twice…
all things said there is lies and comes in disguise.
So fallen apart is all I see in my life…
so fallen is what I turn to see behind me…
So endlessly empty and left here to strife…
so lost in a life and never found what I wanted it to be…
Traces of you still linger on my wall…
voices I can never recall.
The tear on your face…
leave a silent trace…
and so lost in this maze.
Like you I see things and nothing gain…
like hell I have felt the same pain…
did not know tears can be seen in the rain.
I have tried to find my way in this life…
but to often all been taken before it was rife…
thought I saw my dream in your eyes.
I do not know why we get lost in my mind…
not leaving the heart to decide and love never find…
the sore hurt of life leaving me to die slowly and no bottom to rewind.
So fallen apart is all I see in my life…
so fallen is what I turn to see behind me…
So endlessly empty and left here to strife…
so lost in a life and never found what I wanted it to be…
Traces of you still linger on my wall…
voices I can never recall.
” So fallen apart “, engages the reader’s full gamut of emotions with an indelibly idiosyncratic kind of grandeur. Curiously ,whilst reading, it did bring to mind ,George Harrison’s ” While My Guitar Gently Weeps “. The poem would ,in my humble view, serve as an excellent template for the development of a playscript or even as the basis of a novel.