See if you can see…
The moon and the stars so bright,
But none to light up my lonely night.
See if you can see,
The flowers in the garden ,
Confessing all of my mistakes,
Smiling and pleading to you for your pardon..
See if you can see..
iIn the depth of my eyes.
You will see my feelings for you..
You will get my love in profusion..
And this is my real life’s big illusion..
See if you can see,
Through the oceans so deep.
You will see my feelings for you,
Waves rising and falling asleep.
See if you can see..
The rain pouring out my pain..
See if you can see,
the pain of my heart..
To see you who is living so far..
To see you once at least,
And to see you again and again..
Destiny Poets
Uniting and celebrating the best "Writers" and "Poetry" from around the world centred out of Destiny Church Wakefield
A well-crafted poem suffused with the preoccupations of the heart.
Thanks Vijay sir.
A lyrical, affectionate rendering diffusing love in the poetic surrounding.
Thanks Parneet for your words of appreciation
The author conveys an intimacy and empathy with inimitable acumen.
Thanks Louis Sir.Your words add to my confidence
THE PAIN OF LONGING BURDENS THE HEART…THE WAITING IN SO FAR TO HAVE AND TO HOLD FOR LIFE…A CHANCE FORGOTTEN BY HOPE OF TIME …
Suzette your words of appreciation are poetry themselves
Thanks
A poem of pain and longing this song also carries a quiet wistfulness at its heart
Dear Amita you reach to the hidden core of the verse.thanks
The pain of the poet as the protagonist remains blinded to her love……moving write
Thanks dear for your beautiful words of appreciation.