The rescuer
A Reformer
If ever, with
Helping hand
Will enquire
The destiny
Nought!
Askance look
With vigil eyes
Will always, book
The newcomer
Suspicious, of its
Copious nature
Full awake!
It will certainly
Pain me
One day
To say
Good-bye
To thee all
In my rescue
” Rescue ” undoubtedly conveys a sense an incisive,emotional charge, that for the reader was dissipated significantly by the poem’s use of archaic english grammar and impenetrable allusions to a rescuer and reformer.
Thanks Louis for thy comments.