My Life Partner

If I were to choose,
my life partner-
more prettier, more brainier
with fine lips sweet;
if i were to have a wish list,
for myself as often-
a little taller , with a little more brawn;
I may reincarnate again and again,
nay ! I may not wreak the same for her,
for a prettier brainier self
even with fine lips;
for my partner for life glows
with a sparkle known to her only,
getting better with time;until antiquity…

4 thoughts on “My Life Partner

  1. Louis Kasatkin

    ” in glorious antiquity only..” is,if the metaphor is deemed appropriate, a firmly delivered ” punchline ” to this concise romantically-inclined work.Redolent of daydream and conjecture it reaches its resolution with consummate skill.

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  2. lokesh

    Dear Sir (to Mr Louis Kasatkin),
    As always,your pithy comments, particularly about this poem,gives it the punchline that it deserves- giving me the much needed boost & encouragement. with regards.

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  3. Louis Kasatkin

    This poem comprises one of the twelve chosen for inclusion in ” PICK OF THE POEMS “,an Editorial selection of the best poems posted during January 1 – March 31 here at Destiny Poets. Our Facebook page carried the original announcement on Saturday,17 November.PICK OF THE POEMS:QUARTERLY 2012 RETROSPECTIVE.
    ” PICK OF THE POEMS ” ,is an Editorial Selection of the best poems posted at http://www.destinypoets.co.uk in each quarter of 2012. Each quarter’s Selection will comprise 12 posts,tabulated in alphabetical order.We start with the 1st.quarter’s poems posted between January 1st.- March 31st. * Alice and The Hatter – Susie Bertie….* Dad I saw you well
    – Jan C.Sorensen….* Daughter’s Freedom – Audrey Lines…. * Freezing Night – Iulia Gherghei….* Fused – Umarani Jayaraj….* Genesis – Reena Prasad….* Guide – Madhumita Ghosh….* Lindy Hop – Sunil Sharma….* My life partner – Lokesh Roy….* Naive Heart – Gina Mcknight….* Spring – Elizabeth Hexberg….* Time Travel – Hollie Bolster. Enjoy , share and comment.

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