a burning flame from the start
captured this lonesome heart
i feel you near me
even an ocean apart from you
yearning, waiting, hoping
more than emotions this passion for both.
the highs and lows we have conquered
sharks tried to bite off our feet
but still we chose to swim
in this sea of love only the two of us are in
my innamorata in the land of my dreams
a lass is swept off by your gentle arms.
loving you like the way i breathe in every second
being far from you is not a hindrance
to build our castles in the air today
and seeing them all come true sooner
only fools would say this is too hard and so better quit
for they don’t know true love waits.
look at how we made it through
this valley of the tempests and turbulence in our flight
in every second that passes, you are there in my mind, innamorata
we simply cannot let go of each other will break us into tiny pieces if we ever dare
our love is still growing strong, will make it through
will weather all storms and what might ever go wrong.
Elizabeth E. Castillo © 2011
This poem resonates like a fully orchestrated melody sweeping the audience along in a momentary , sublime , emotional rollercoaster ride.
Thanks for your wonderful comment, Louis 🙂
Fluent and insightful.