settling in on the top berth
exchanged for my lower
with an elder
I glance around
“three men and me-perfect”
I whisper to my husband
gnashing his teeth,
hundreds of miles away
the rhythmic beat of
iron wheels on tracks
weigh heavy on my eyelids
as they shut out senses
inviting sleep
QUEEYOUUUUU
rudely awakeened, I
gather my bearings
waiting – there it was again
queeyouuuu
quickly followed by a
phewewew, yet another
groooooo ….
three men with
three snores
queeyouuuu, phewewewew, groooooo
groaning inwardly I
bury my face in the pillow
good-bye sleep
queeyouuuu,
I start timing the next
phewewewew
three beats to the next
groooooo
one following the other
in perfect sync with
the periodic pulse of iron wheels
strange midnight lullaby
rocking me gently till soon
I’m dead to the world, perhaps
snoring
Elizabeth Kuriakose
An pleasantly engaging divertissement with delightful touches of onomatopoeic tropes.
Thanks Louis for your delightful remarks. Honoured.
an amusing piece of writing with good use of onomatopoeia
Thank you aashi. Honoured.
An enjoyable read…Lovely Elizabeth..