Counting the stars above
and the pebbles below
you waited until
fading of a horizon
and I ! I on my part lived
my days hounding past
as a musketeer wounded
forgetting the past
paranoid depraved
like a monk in abstinence
to atone for all wrongs
immersed in deep penance
wrong you were
and I too , to nurture
believing a carcass
believing in it’s living attire
as you wait until
fading of a horizon
maybe you still deserve
undue my attention…
Love’s labour’s lost updated ?
A pure coincidence, if at all….your appreciation is the guiding force !
We seldom withdraw our attention even after losing the person. But then it’s undue. It will fade of course in time..
How true Sana…..but you may notice that the person is not lost, the person lost !
I liked the ending. A rewarding read.
Yes. Thank you for liking & encouraging me, as always.
I think ‘i felt it’ would be more apt than ‘i loved it’
Sure ! but where is ‘ I loved it’ ?