Words axed
the fused roots.
of oneness .
Splinters flew
sap oozed
body swayed.
The branches
flailed its arms
in despair
to hug for one last time
before being torn apart .
With a loud thud
love lay down
to rest
unmindful
of the clamour.
Destiny Poets
Uniting and celebrating the best "Writers" and "Poetry" from around the world centred out of Destiny Church Wakefield
Pretty poignant -the simile so drawn between axed love & axed branches demonstrating the power of poetry- kudos to Madam Anna Maria for evoking such emotions.
Concise , sharply drawn and to the point.A good example of that age old aphorism , that less is more.
Thank you Louis Kasatkin and LokeshRoy ..for the words of encouragement:)