with my child
on my shoulder, i walk
in the long rain
carrying the heaviness
of shattered dreams
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Very well written.
Excellent portrayal in so few words..
Thanks Gopallahiri and Sana Rose for the appreciation.
So simple, yet profound ….this is the best that I have ever read…
Many thanks, Rashmi for the appreciation.
This work demonstrates Ramesh’s mastery of this particular genre of poetry with customary aplomb.
Destiny Poets’ International Community of Poets ( ICOP ) are pleased to announce that for September 2013 , the following works have been chosen in the categories of Poem of the Month and Highly Commended . **** Poem of the Month..****..is..”Dhaka University” by AZMM Moksedul Milon….*** Highly Commended (tabulated alphabetically) *** are the following….”Alas ! the gong has lost its voice” by Ogunjimi James Taiwo….”A Portrayal of Pain” by Swanti Sharma….”Blessed” by Basil Razack….”Disheartened” by Suzanne Parlee….”Given” by Jan Christian Sorensen….”Illusion” by Tapeshwar Prasad….”Let me go” by Santanu Halder….”Life is” by Sridhar Karanam….”Long Rain” by Ramesh Anand….”Profanity” by Sangeeta Sharma….”The Bible” by Elizabeth Hexberg….”Unsung Samaritans” by Sharon Elizabeth Walker…..
Muscular dream, a heavier thought conglomerate.
Thanks Tapeswar for your invaluable comment!