30 thoughts on “Little Birdie”

1. Louis Kasatkin June 20, 2015 at 10:30 am

   A pleasant and delightful poetic divertissement.

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   1. aashi Post authorJune 20, 2015 at 4:16 pm

      Thank you so much Louis Kasatkin Sir. I am overjoyed to be a part of Destiny Poets.

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2. iram July 2, 2015 at 12:01 pm

   Such an amazing poem.Keep it up.

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   1. aashi July 30, 2015 at 6:07 am

      Thank you very much Iram.

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3. shabahat July 2, 2015 at 12:09 pm

   Very nice poem

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   1. aashi Post authorJuly 2, 2015 at 12:37 pm

      Thank you

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4. Saba Husain July 2, 2015 at 12:16 pm

   Nice ! 🙂

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   1. aashi Post authorJuly 2, 2015 at 12:38 pm

      Thank you so much.

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5. Shalu July 2, 2015 at 12:17 pm

   Lovely expression

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   1. aashi Post authorJuly 2, 2015 at 12:39 pm

      Thank you very much for liking it.

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6. Vaishali July 2, 2015 at 1:08 pm

   Good poem!! Keep on writing 🙂

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   1. aashi Post authorJuly 2, 2015 at 4:13 pm

      Thanks so much.

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7. faiz haider July 2, 2015 at 2:24 pm

   nice poem. very delightfull.

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   1. aashi Post authorJuly 2, 2015 at 4:14 pm

      Thank you

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8. Syed ansar zaidi July 2, 2015 at 2:36 pm

   Heart touching poem
   Great job

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   1. aashi Post authorJuly 2, 2015 at 4:15 pm

      Thank you very much for such a nice comment.

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9. julia robert July 2, 2015 at 5:25 pm

   Nice work!!

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   1. aashi July 2, 2015 at 5:50 pm

      Thanks Julia

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10. Ali Hadi July 2, 2015 at 9:25 pm

    Very well written and well thought. God Bless.

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    1. aashi July 3, 2015 at 12:33 pm

       Thank you Sir

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11. Maya Dev July 3, 2015 at 7:18 am

    Nicely composed feelings of excitement,anxiety,reality. Last 3 lines touching…Keep it up and welcome to Destiny Poets family Aashi 🙂

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    1. aashi July 3, 2015 at 12:30 pm

       Thank you so much maya.

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12. John Anthony Fingleton July 3, 2015 at 9:11 am

    I love this…I seem to be also having an affair with death.

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    1. aashi July 3, 2015 at 12:32 pm

       Thank you very much Sir

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13. Joel Ogunjimi July 3, 2015 at 10:01 am

    Amazing…

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    1. aashi July 30, 2015 at 6:06 am

       Thanks so much Joel. 🙂

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14. javed July 7, 2015 at 9:54 am

    real picture of a captivated self

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    1. aashi July 30, 2015 at 6:05 am

       Thank you very much

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15. wasi August 2, 2015 at 8:11 am

    Such an amazing poem.

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    1. aashi August 2, 2015 at 8:19 am

       Thank you so much

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