Let me go
To touch the wintry desolate
Sky of hopfulness..
A cold wind enwraps
This crispy dawn
Behind the curtain
Of dark deep gloom.
Let me go
To unfurl my wings
That bring an ocean of hope
In the dull dismal valley
Of lifelessness..
I sing the song alone..
For the generations to come.
In ” Let me go ” , the author deals with weighty matters which expresse a certain sadness and weariness akin to melancholy. Welcome to Destiny Poets’ International Community of Poets, Santanu Halder with an excellent first post and share on our site !
Thank you so much Sir for your beautiful words..I feel humbled and honoured…
Destiny Poets’ International Community of Poets ( ICOP ) are pleased to announce that for September 2013 , the following works have been chosen in the categories of Poem of the Month and Highly Commended . **** Poem of the Month..****..is..”Dhaka University” by AZMM Moksedul Milon….*** Highly Commended (tabulated alphabetically) *** are the following….”Alas ! the gong has lost its voice” by Ogunjimi James Taiwo….”A Portrayal of Pain” by Swanti Sharma….”Blessed” by Basil Razack….”Disheartened” by Suzanne Parlee….”Given” by Jan Christian Sorensen….”Illusion” by Tapeshwar Prasad….”Let me go” by Santanu Halder….”Life is” by Sridhar Karanam….”Long Rain” by Ramesh Anand….”Profanity” by Sangeeta Sharma….”The Bible” by Elizabeth Hexberg….”Unsung Samaritans” by Sharon Elizabeth Walker…..
Lovely write… “to unfurl the wings ” and “to sing the song alone for.generations to.come”.. Shows pain as.well.as.hope..
thank you so much Kuchibhotla Sarada madam for your beautiful comment
“Let me go” pulverize the finer goal, unbounded; to soar the heights where only loneliness reign and hope holds a baton of light!
Excellent!
Thank you Tapeshwar Ji for your beautiful words of praise.
A poem laced with sorrow but ends with sunrays.