Keep me suspended.

You can make the Whole World sigh…

Your beauty is like a dagger in my Heart…

The paradise in your mind and soul will never die…

The beauty is not just a facade on your face for a start…

I have never been so close to perfection as with you…

I never come close enough to see your beauty shine on me…

Dreaming of what once were and I blew that  too…

To late I realized it takes two to go through life, I see…

Kept here on a sidetrack and not really going anywhere… It is like catching a flame from a star on the dark heaven… I am ready now but far to late…oh so damn late Again… The World is in it’s deepest sigh course off me… So send me into suspension…

I started out well and thought nothing of you but so sudden caught up in your eyes…

Your eyes keep turning the Whole World to be the beauties place in this Galaxy now…

Looking at a moment in our time I sink into dark despair course of all my lies…

I so much wanted to to redeem all of my failures but now I don’t know how…

I still dream my self to where life is without pain and suffering…

I do believe in forgiveness of my crimes of passion so immaturely made by my heart…

My poor Heart belong to you and that’s my offering…

I haven’t got much to give you but still my precious gift of all for a start…

Kept here on a sidetrack and not really going anywhere… It is like catching a flame from a star on the dark heaven… I am ready now but far to late…oh so damn late Again… The World is in it’s deepest sigh course off me… So send me into suspension …

 

 

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About jachso

Hey Destiny Poets. I live in Denmark about 90 km from Copenhagen and works in Roskilde as a teacher and mentor. I'm probably not like most men of my age and yes I am aged 50 years old. I've tried a lot of jobs without finding what I'm passionate about. Writing, I have always loved and I was probably just 14 years old when I produced my first poem. I have not yet been released some of my poems, but I hope it happens one day. I just finished a novel which I would like to have published, now the time and talent show whether I have the ability to write. Poetry has a special meaning for me and this is where I really feel at home. My life has sometimes been marked by many losses. In the mid eighties, I lost my fiance at the time when the accident happened was pregnant. She lost control of the car and drove herself and her child, who was on his way thereby, to death. It has really made its mark on my life and way of thinking. In the late nineties, I had problems with my back and had to seek other avenues to support myself. I finally decided to enroll at university and was admitted to the humanist line. I read philosophy, science, psychology, journalism and history, but philosophy and psychology is my major interest. I thrive today in the RUC aka Roskilde University just 25 km from Copenhagen. My job is to guide and teach, and it is a job with speed and that gives me a lot again. I have two collections of poems ready to be released, if I can find a publisher who will publish them. I have no children, it would obviously be my lot in life although I have tried, but luck never smiled at me that way. If you have any questions for me so I hope you just ask away all you want, I'll respond as soon as I have read the questions. With kindest regards from Jan Sorensen

1 thought on “Keep me suspended.

  1. Louis Kasatkin

    ” Keep me suspended ” ,is not only a deeply personal and emotionally charged work ,but clearly the basis for expression and publication in other literary forms such as a novel or play.

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