I’m in love ~
I’m in love with
The facade of the night;
Pretending to wrap me
In its rhythmic sounds;
I know it’s just a way to
Lend me the unreachable,
Painting the unimaginable ~
Still, I’m in love ~
I’m in love with
The facade of the night…
I’m in love ~
I’m in love with
The silver-lined clouds;
Veiling the halo of light
Around the darkness;
I know it lasts only until
A gale makes it airlight,
Blinding my insight ~
Still, I’m in love ~
I’m in love with
The silver-lined clouds…
I’m in love ~
I’m in love with
The epitome of my life;
Shrinking my existence into
The largeness that’s you;
I know it’s how my heart
Keeps beating, my soul
Survives the overhaul ~
You, I’m in love with ~
I’m in love with
The epitome of my life…
– June 27th, 2013
© Sana Rose 2013
” I’m in love ” addresses familiar interpersonal relationship tropes with commendable alacrity and brio.
Great poem because, relationships are not perfect….
ahhh…just beautiful
Thank you Louis for your in-depth comment…
Thank you Rashmi and Suzanne for your sweet comments. 🙂
Love is best felt when you seek – in seeking , it is actually your best side of personality that comes to fore. In reality, it is a divine affair only to be eulogised as such.
Great thought, Lokesh. Thank you!