I came

I came not

To receive

What you have

To offer to me,

I came to give

What I have

To offer

To you.

 

Pramila Khadun

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About pramilakhadun

I am the holder of a Bsc degree in Food and Nutrition from S.N.D.T University,Pune,India.Have taught this subject in a private institution for almost thirty-five years.Currently, I am retired and travel alot with my husband Raj, daughters Dr Rajnee and Priyum and son Airline Captain.Had my first book of poetry published by Minerva press, London and other two in Mauritius.More coming soon.I love poetry and enjoy reading poems of poets across the world and I feel Destiny Poets is the right place for me.

14 thoughts on “I came

    1. pramilakhadun Post author

      Maaya, this is one among the most beautiful comments I received for a poem of mine.It is touching, it is beautiful.

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  1. Kamlesh Acharya

    This for me is a bare-bones poem that has used zero fat (read extra words) for standing tall on its own feet. A brilliant example of how simple words can communicate so much without extravagant adjectives.
    🙂

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  2. Kumaara Sukeja

    How true love is not sanctimonious but an uninhibited act of surrendering the whole is what is pithily conveyed by the perfectionist !

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