I came not
To receive
What you have
To offer to me,
I came to give
What I have
To offer
To you.
Pramila Khadun
Destiny Poets
Uniting and celebrating the best "Writers" and "Poetry" from around the world centred out of Destiny Church Wakefield
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A short,insightful poem on the selflessness of true love.Beautiful !
Thanks dear Vijay for appreciating this short poem of mine, kind of you bro.
The joy of giving is immense …. 🙂
I think we have been moulded on the same anvil dear Rashmi, thanks for sharing my views dear.
The bloom.
Such a joy…!
Thanks Tapeshwar for this short and sweet comment.
A poem written with great convictions and these few lines deeply carries many an intriguing philosophical, meta-physical concepts. Lovely poem Pramila
Maaya, this is one among the most beautiful comments I received for a poem of mine.It is touching, it is beautiful.
Circumspect, diffident and sublime.
Thanks my dear Louis for this charmingly beautiful comment.
This for me is a bare-bones poem that has used zero fat (read extra words) for standing tall on its own feet. A brilliant example of how simple words can communicate so much without extravagant adjectives.
🙂
What a lovely comment, feel humbly honored dear Kamlesh.
How true love is not sanctimonious but an uninhibited act of surrendering the whole is what is pithily conveyed by the perfectionist !
I am touched by your beautiful comment dear Kumaara, thanks a lot.