He stood like a cactus
in an oasis of his dreams
Mirage it seemed
as and when he looked up
at the desert end
Whence his rosary
will be counted
fettered
he was bounded by his fate, and
Sand storm taking a plunge on him
He took a hunch
of determination
on his broad shoulders
pawing his feet, desert soft; unknown
as to why, he is fixing his gaze upward
Beautifully penned. Nice and intense write
So much thanks dear Sir Smruti Ranjan Mohanty Ji.
Use of beautiful imageries like cactus, mirage,oasis in HUNCH OF DETERMINATION
So much thanks Pushmaotee Subrun.
Very nice expression of intense feeling
So much thanks Dr. Swati ji
Desert imagery and divinity is a fine parallel, lending intensity of the keenness of the seeker.
Very aptly mirrored the thoughts dear Sir Parneet Jaggi Ji. So much thanks.
A masterly presentation of powerful images.
So humbled dear Sir Vijay Nair Ji.