Surprise at every moment
Stay uptight
It doesn’t matter
If you are right or wrong
Life is going to play it’s song
Hear it or close your ears
Like waves in water
keep throwing you around.
You will lose the fight
But not the flight
if you are awake.
Be aware when every
breath you take.
Life hates you sleep
In your careless
sophisticated Homes
So it comes to shake you up
To make you more alive.
Destiny Poets
Uniting and celebrating the best "Writers" and "Poetry" from around the world centred out of Destiny Church Wakefield
A straightforward poetic divertissement leavened with some keen observations.On the whole it’s a piece that would benefit from further reconsideration and development.
Thanks Louis for your valuable comments will work on it more.
Interesting insights embellish this contemplative literary piece.
Thank you Vijay sir for your valuable comment
Life is truly a constant learning experience. The poem is spontaneous in thought and expression and could also be entitled “Life Lessons” or “Life : An adventure”.
Thanks for the review, You are right life is indeed an adventure”