Forever is such a long time gone and yet to come.
We spread and we claim…yeah we expropriate.
We concure and we declare of what we want.
Some day soon this timeline stop and we look at all the empty picturers at our wall.
All I want is to breathe the air, drink the water and feed my love ones.
I pondered about it and lived out my time given here.
So close to leave two years ago, but I am still here.

Forever we can fullfill others dreams…
Forever fight for what is not ours…
Forever blink our eyes and ask what going on?

When I was just a small boy, the world spoke to me.
Save me and please keep me alive.
So distant and so obscure now and an nearly impossible task to do.
But now I think we should show our true color to prove we are all here.
We neve really needed anyone to tell us what to do.
To save what is given to us from our birth we have to fight.
Raise yor face and look, there is so much more than gold, the Devine is inside you…

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About jachso

Hey Destiny Poets. I live in Denmark about 90 km from Copenhagen and works in Roskilde as a teacher and mentor. I'm probably not like most men of my age and yes I am aged 50 years old. I've tried a lot of jobs without finding what I'm passionate about. Writing, I have always loved and I was probably just 14 years old when I produced my first poem. I have not yet been released some of my poems, but I hope it happens one day. I just finished a novel which I would like to have published, now the time and talent show whether I have the ability to write. Poetry has a special meaning for me and this is where I really feel at home. My life has sometimes been marked by many losses. In the mid eighties, I lost my fiance at the time when the accident happened was pregnant. She lost control of the car and drove herself and her child, who was on his way thereby, to death. It has really made its mark on my life and way of thinking. In the late nineties, I had problems with my back and had to seek other avenues to support myself. I finally decided to enroll at university and was admitted to the humanist line. I read philosophy, science, psychology, journalism and history, but philosophy and psychology is my major interest. I thrive today in the RUC aka Roskilde University just 25 km from Copenhagen. My job is to guide and teach, and it is a job with speed and that gives me a lot again. I have two collections of poems ready to be released, if I can find a publisher who will publish them. I have no children, it would obviously be my lot in life although I have tried, but luck never smiled at me that way. If you have any questions for me so I hope you just ask away all you want, I'll respond as soon as I have read the questions. With kindest regards from Jan Sorensen

1 thought on “Forever.

  1. amitapaul

    Of course there is much more than gold in life and the world and it’s been argued by many over the centuries that the Divine resides in the Human Soul but what is one to make of “ fullfill “ for “ fulfil “ , “ concure “ for “ concur “ , “ yor “for “ your “, “ neve “ for “ never “, “ my love ones “ instead of “ my loved ones “ and so on ? With so many distractions of spelling , grammar and punctuation, it is not easy to appreciate the basic theme of this philosophic poem


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